tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-600681319166897704.post5602978117269109903..comments2012-04-30T11:32:33.007-05:00Comments on An End to This: Chapter 1 - page 2Roohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16115267741547198666noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-600681319166897704.post-75741747889784200532012-03-15T17:20:41.378-05:002012-03-15T17:20:41.378-05:00MOAR!!MOAR!!kimbalayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11735961412891402018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-600681319166897704.post-81972751544425655232012-03-15T14:07:32.588-05:002012-03-15T14:07:32.588-05:00Woo, awesome storytelling! Great pictures too, mu...Woo, awesome storytelling! Great pictures too, much better than how my Sims 3 photos come out. :) Love the story and looking forward to the next chapter.sarianastarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15678631762472549685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-600681319166897704.post-66854043132416355682012-03-15T10:06:59.949-05:002012-03-15T10:06:59.949-05:00That last bit makes her seem GUILTY! But I guess ...That last bit makes her seem GUILTY! But I guess she's covering her ass because she will probably be considered a suspect in his death. I don't fault her for that. She's FREEEE ... FREEE FALLING! ;O))MysticSpirithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794359515628051541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-600681319166897704.post-16653372866724606122012-03-15T09:49:45.633-05:002012-03-15T09:49:45.633-05:00Oydie.
You set your scenes beautifully. But they n...Oydie.<br />You set your scenes beautifully. But they need to be longer. Much longer.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-600681319166897704.post-46580249451360638362012-03-15T09:44:33.622-05:002012-03-15T09:44:33.622-05:00Dayam! That's one cold-hearted...
Well done...Dayam! That's one cold-hearted... <br /><br />Well done Ruby. I like the way this story is unfolding. Very nice indeed.CeeCeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14450184597505360805noreply@blogger.com